this needs to be much more specific, and thorough in placesonly at the end do you include examples and even then you don't say exactly what each video demonstratesa bit average for your high standards JamesC-
Still needs more e.g's and images. Conclusion?also sort the order of your first 2 posts
Better, but...Some examples need more description, saying exactly what they illustrate. Similarly, some points you make/areas you discuss need more visual support.Iconography is a little lazy and would benefit from e.g's Still no conclusion summarising your findingsB+
this needs to be much more specific, and thorough in places
ReplyDeleteonly at the end do you include examples and even then you don't say exactly what each video demonstrates
a bit average for your high standards James
C-
Still needs more e.g's and images. Conclusion?
ReplyDeletealso sort the order of your first 2 posts
Better, but...
ReplyDeleteSome examples need more description, saying exactly what they illustrate. Similarly, some points you make/areas you discuss need more visual support.
Iconography is a little lazy and would benefit from e.g's
Still no conclusion summarising your findings
B+